國中英文文法? - 花

By Andy
at 2011-07-19T00:00

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改錯並重寫下列文章:
Last Sunday, I have a visit to Taipei International Flower Exposition with my family. We go there by bus and see a lot of flowers. The flowers are beautiful and colorful there. They are red, purple ,yellow and green. My mother buy some souvenir for decorate our house. I like rose very much and my sister Helen like tulips. So, we take many pictures of them. We also have lunch there and my father ordered special dishes for us. Especially, we really enjoy the scented tea. We was really a lot of fun.
(共有12個錯誤)
例:
Last Sunday, I had a visit to Taipei International Flower Exposition with my family.

誰有辦法找出所有的錯誤,並且修正?
不用整篇打出來!
謝謝^^

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By Elvira
at 2011-07-20T00:39

修正及詳解：
Last Sunday, I had a visit to Taipei International Flower Exposition with my family. （時間為上週日，所以應將have改為過去式） We went there by bus and saw a lot of flowers. （因為接著敘述的時間點仍然為上週日，所以動詞都應改為過去式，且中間有“and“
屬於“對等連接詞“，前後所連結的動詞狀態應該要一致） The flowers are beautiful and colorful there. （那邊的花當時的狀態是那樣，所以無須修正，若將are改成were意思變成：當時那些花都很漂亮，可是我回家以後他們可能變醜了，所以不須刻意改成were，當然此種狀況也不是不可能，只是一般我們不會刻意修改） They are red, purple ,yellow and green.（原因如上句） My mother bought some souvenirs for decorating our house. （媽媽是上週日買的花，所以動詞一樣改成過去式，既然紀念品的前面有放some代表不只一樣紀念品，因此請將它改成複數形名詞，for介系詞後面要接v-ing或n.所以將它改為動名詞形態） I like the rose very much and my sister Helen likes tulips. （我非常喜歡那兒的玫瑰花，限定“那裡的“玫瑰，所以要加上the這個定冠詞來用以指定是“花博的“玫瑰；而姐姐是第三人稱，所以顯然的動詞應該為第三人稱單數狀）So, we take many pictures for them. （“為了“幫誰拍照要用for）We also had lunch there and my father ordered special dishes for us. （一樣是過去時間用過去式）Especially, we really enjoyed the scented tea. We were really a lot of fun.（一樣是過去時間用過去式）
希望對您有幫助唷：D

By Hedy
at 2011-07-23T23:03

稍微再補充一些兒 from 婷寶 ( 初學者 5 級 )
(1) I have a visit to Taipei International Flower Exposition with my family....
此處可用visit 做動詞即可:
I visited Taipei International....
(2) .... I like the rose very much
rose要育複數,不可能只喜歡一朵
......I like the roses ......應該是打太快,沒注意到
2011-07-25 22:37:52 補充：
(3) ....so we take many pictures for them.
take 要用過去式
.....so we took many pictures for them...
(4) We were really a lot of fun
要用動詞 have ,不能用 be 動詞
We had a lot of fun there.

By Andrew
at 2011-07-20T22:23

同意003的說法和詳細解析^^

By Steve
at 2011-07-23T10:06

Last Sunday, I had a visit to Taipei International Flower Exposition with my family. We went there by bus and saw a lot of flowers. The flowers are beautiful and colorful there. They are red, purple ,yellow and green. My mother bought some souvenir for decorating our house. I like roses very much and my sister Helen likes tulips. So, we took many pictures for them. We also had lunch there and my father ordered special dishes for us. Especially, we really enjoyed the scented tea. We were really a lot of fun.
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By Christine
at 2011-07-21T10:49

Last Sunday, I had a visit to Taipei International Flower Exposition with my family. We went there by bus and saw a lot of flowers. The flowers were beautiful and colorful there. They were red, purple ,yellow and green. My mother bought some souvenir to decorate our house. I like roses very much and my sister Helen likes tulips. So, we take many pictures of them. We also had lunch there and my father ordered special dishes for us. Especially, we really enjoyed the scented tea. We were really a lot of fun.

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