幫我看一下我的英文翻譯(英翻中)是不是正確謝謝 - 花

"And if you don't know, you can't be forced to tell,"
這句我一直在想他是指說
"如果你不知道,你也不要去說"
還是
"如果你不知道,你就不會被逼問出來"
或有更好的翻譯呢?--------------------------"and then both our bodies will be left here, displayed in creative ways for the Ministry to find when they finally get off their official collective arses and come to investigate the Dark Mark floating above Hogwarts(地名)"
我原本是翻這樣,但是文意看不太懂,總覺得好像翻不對
"然後我們將被留在這，用以炫耀他們創造性的發現，最終當他們拿到了他們想要的愚蠢官方訊息後，他們就會放出黑魔標記，使它飄浮在霍格華茲的上空。"--------------------------his face buried itself in the crook of her neck.這我真不知道要怎麼翻
他將臉埋在她的頸部深處(這樣嗎 翻成頸部彎曲處很奇怪吧)
啊啊啊 我暈啊~--------------------------and after much mental debate decided to do what felt right at that moment. He lifted the covers from his side of the bed and wrapped his arms protectively around her before sleep claimed him as well.
這段mental debate 是不是翻成心靈上的掙扎呢...
最後 sleep claimed 看不太懂,想問達人要怎麼翻比較好
這是故事中的一段...
一開始女主角有憂鬱症,睡不著很害怕,所以要求男主角講睡前故事給她聽,說著說著她就睡著了...
然後接了這段文章...大概知道意思卻不知道怎麼翻譯--------------------------"There's a door beyond the classroom area that leads out to the greenhouses," he told her sharply. "Ermengarde uses it to slip down to the village for a nip now and then at the Three Broomsticks(三掃帚酒吧)."其實我看不太懂這一段
因為喜歡這故事所以想自己把它翻出來收藏
但英文很爛不知道怎麼翻啊 (淚)
如果有對翻譯有興趣的可以交個朋友 ㄒAㄒ

希望有高手能夠指點謝謝你們

Update:
其實是哈利波特同人文...不過很好看...可惜都是英文
遇到好看的就想收藏, 有空就會想把它翻成英文 :)
最後一行nip看不懂
for a nip 是什麼(買酒喝嗎)
咬人是蠻奇怪的
其實我英文不好,我只是喜歡看國外小說(淚......)
但覺得蠻詭異的
還是謝謝你們
Update 2:
啊我知道了 for a nip 是酌一口..(看來我需要一本好點的字典)
謝拉
Mr. Cappuccino 也謝謝你喔(抱)~
但是有些地方老翻哥 翻的比較正確
太感謝你們了