可以幫我修改英文的文章嗎? - 花

The second Sunday in May is Mother’s Day.
How will we creative ways to celebrate Mother’s Day?
五月的第二個星期天就是母親節了,該用什麼妙點子來慶祝偉大的母親呢?
Dear Diary, do you know? I was a naughty girl and often skipped classes, when I was a kid. Although, my mom are very well-educated, so all I am , or can be, I owe to my angel mother. However, I still often argue and even talk back with my mom as I get older. In spite of knowing she treats me as love well, whip well from her within.
But I cant tolerate that someone keeps nagging by my ears. ‘’sigh’’! I seldom have disagreement with my friends and have more patience towards them. I still don’t know why the more intimate people are to me, the less patience I have. Its easy to show my hot-temper with family.
親愛的日記呀!你知道嗎?我小時候很調皮,也常翹課,但母親依舊很重視小孩的教育,我的成就即能力都該歸功於我慈愛的母親呀!然而,長大後,還會常常跟媽媽頂嘴吵架,雖然曉得母親是出自於「 愛 之深,責之切」,但在我這年齡還是很受不了有人一直在我耳邊睟睟唸。唉!為什麼我對朋友就能有耐心,而對家人就容易發脾氣呢?
Mother is like our home’s castle. You’ve been too busy taking care of this family, mom. Mommy’s done so much for us we have to let you know how much we appreciate you. Y mom’s favorite flower was the pink carnation. Carnation represent the sweetness, warm and endurance of mother’s love. And then make her a Mother’s Day card. I hope Mother’s Day will strengthen family bonds.
母親就像是家的城堡。媽!你太忙於照顧整個家了,你為我們付出那麼多,在這特別的日子,我們要讓你知道有多感激你。母親最喜歡的花就是粉紅康乃馨,代表母愛的甜美,溫馨和耐心,然後在做一張母親節賀卡給他,希望能藉由母親節強化家庭的凝聚力。
I really appreciate the things my mom do for me, and for all the loving things you’ve done to help the family day by day, for guidance and for tender care you’ve given us along the way, Mum, you deserve our warm thanks and special love. I’ll take care of you forever and ever!
我真的很感謝母親為我做的每一件事,你日復一日幫助家人,不辭勞苦,你一路扶持,細心呵護著我們,我會永遠照顧你直到永遠。